vrijdag 5 december 2008

Black Coats Chapter 7

Few months later.

Shin and Anne started liking eachother and they realised they go to the same school. They promise to talk to eachother at school when they get out the hospital, which is now.



Shinzuzu goes to school on his bicycle. While he is cycling he sees Kimmi M. cycling past him. She said: "Welcome back.". Shinzuzu wanted to reply back but he was too late.

Shinzuzu enters the school and he looks for Annemary at the lockers. After searching some minutes he finally finds Annemary, and he sees 3 boys annoying her. Shinzuzu walks up to the one annoying her the most. Another tall boy walks up to one of the guys called Lerry and he pushes the guy.

"What the hell are you doing!? Leave her alone." is what the boy said. "that's none of your business!" said Lerry and he pushes the boy against the lockers. The boy runs to Lerry and hits him on the left cheek, making him fall on the ground. "I said leave her alone." the boy said. The 2 other boys help Lerry and they walk away. Annemary says: "Thank you Yih!" and hugs him.

Annemary notices Shinzuzu is watching and sees Shinzuzu walking and then running away. "Hey. wait up Shin. Its not what it looks like!" says Annemary. Annemary tries to run after him but she lost him.

woensdag 3 december 2008

Black Coats Chapter 6

Shinzuzu wakes up, feeling dizzy. He looks around and sees a doctor coming his way.

"Hello, my name is Kiha and you're in the Sunny Hospital!" she says. She takes out 2 pills and a glass of water and hands them over to Shinzuzu. Kiha says: "Please swallow the pills and you'll be allright" Shinzuzu takes the pills and the glass of water and she walks to the patient next to Shinzuzu.

Kiha nudges the patient on the shoulder and the patient awakes. Kiha says to the patient: "Hello my name is Kiha and you're in the Sunny hospital." The patient looks around her and is amazed because she didnt expect to be in a hospital. Kiha takes out 2 pills and a glass of water and hands them over to the patient. The patient takes the pills and the glass of water. Kiha says: "Please swallow the pills and you'll be allright" and she walks away to the next patient.

Shinzuzu is looking to the patient next to him and smiles. The patient notices and says: "What are you looking at...?" Shinzuzu answers with: "Sorry." and he looks away. The patient looks outside and Shinzuzu looks at the patient again.

"So, What's your name?" is what Shinzuzu said. The patient looks at Shinzuzu and answers with: "Well, my name is Annemary but you can call me Anne and yours?" Shinzuzu says: "My name is Shinzuzu, nice to meet you." Annemary says: "Nice to meet you too!" and Annemary offers a hand. Shinzuzu reaches to the hand with his hand, but it's too far. Shinzuzu tries to reach it with all his power, but then he falls off his bed, breaking the glass of water.

Annemary asks: "Are you ok??" Shinzuzu tries to stand up but he can't. Doctor Kiha saw it and helps Shinzuzu. "You should stay in bed and didnt I tell you to swallow the pills?" Annemary was looking and giggling. Shinzuzu answers: "Eh, yeah, sorry." Kiha looks at annemary: "And you have to swallow them too." Annemary stops giggling and answers: "Yes Ma'am." and swallows them.

dinsdag 2 december 2008

Black Coats Chapter 5

I wake up in a room, it is a room I have never seen before. I look around and I see people in white clothes. They have name tags on their shirts. I look around once more, I see a red cross on the door window. I realise I am in the hospital. what happened?

A good looking Doctor come to me, a female. "Hello, How are you?" she says while smiling. I look to her name tag, but she saw me looking at it. "Mine name is Kiha and you're in the Sunny Hospital!" she smiles once again to me.

I smile back and try to talk... "H-how did I come here?" I felt a painfull feeling in my chest so I stopped talking. "You've got a car accident, you were lucky someone saw you! Else you would've been dead."

I try to move my legs, but I notice I cant. I try to find my legs but I can't find them. I ask the doctor: "W..Where are my legs?" The doctor says, "They were lost while saving you from the car accident. I will get you something to drink. You should rest while I'm gone." Kiha walks away gently.



I look into the hospital and I see 5 other people. One as bandage around his chest and head. The other one has bandage around his stomach. Another one lost his arm and 2 others didnt have bandage at all.

I yawn and I realise I am tired. I close my eyes to let them rest, but before I could open them I fell asleep.

Black Coats Chapter 4

Yihkah



Yihkah is an experienced boxer and he is one of the best in his school. He won the local boxing tournament for teenagers 3 years ago, he stopped training afterwards and so he lost some of his skills.

Yihkah is in the training hall, training. 2 white and 1 tanned guy with skate clothes walk in and started to make fun of Yihkah. "Hey pussy! Training for the Loser Championship!?" said one of them. Yihkah ignored them and continued training.

The 3 guys walk closer and say: "Hey idiot. Are you deaf?" Yihkah ignored them once again. The tanned guy, who is obviously the leader of their gang pushed Yihkah. Yihkah quickly runs forward and punches him on the face, breaking his nose. Tanned guy screams of pain and says "YOU *beep*ING Mother*beep*er YOU *beep*ing brioke my nose! Your going down You *beep*ing *beep*!" They walked away.



A hour later after Yihkah was finished, he went home, walking. He always walks past the mart. But this time it's different. He sees the 3 guys he saw at the training hall, with some other guys. 7 to be exact. The tanned guy sees Yihkah and talks to his friends. After 5 seconds he screams: "Thats the *beep*ing guy that broke my nose! GET THAT *beep*!" they all ran to me, I ran too.

"I am way faster than them, they will never get me. NEVER." is what Yihkah thought before he got hit by a butterfly knife in his back. the knife hit his left lunge, making breathing for him hard. They start to get closer, Yihkah tries to run as fast as he can, but he loses his strength and starts to realise he needs to fight back.

Yihkah turns around and beats the first guy he sees in the stomach, then against his face, letting him fall onto the ground. The second guy punched Yihkah on the face, Yihkah hit right back on his face, making him fall too.

the 3rd guy kicks Yihkah, yihkah holds his leg. Yihkah screams of pain.

The tanned guy took out the butterfly knife from Yihkah's back and stabbed Yihkah into the head.



Yihkah hears gun shots before he stopped breathing.

Black Coats Chapter 3

Nomanji



Nomanji, one of the more shy girls and the more gothic looking heads home on a bicycle. She takes a road where almost no one is, it is calm she thinks. "Hey Nomanji! Nomanji!", Nomanji looks back and sees her ex-boyfriend, who was only interested in a sexual relationship. She looks once again and sees he's hiding his right arm.

Nomanji remembers the day they fought, when she broke up with him. It was 2 weeks ago though.

"Its me, Tony, wait for me!"

Nomanji starts to get afraid, she feels uncomfortable and cycles faster and faster.

"Nomanji, Wait up!" is what tony said.

After a minute he says: "You *beep*ing *BEEP* I know it, you're still the same *beep* as you used to be!"

Nomanji starts to cry a little and cycle faster, till she runs out of breath.

Tony rides next to Nomanji eventually and kicks her off the bicycle. Nomanji falls into the grass with some bruises on her arms, legs and face. "What do you want!?" she screamed while crying.

"Its all YOUR fault! I hate you! I will never forgive you for hurting me so much!" He has a knife in his right hand and starts to kick nomanji, eventually stabbing her in the heart.

She bleeds heavily and her heart stops beating.

dinsdag 28 oktober 2008

Black Coats Chapter 2

Annemary




The bell rings, the class is over. Annemary exits the class room and heads to her locker. But, 3 boys block her path and surround her. One of them is called Lerry. Lerry says, "What do we have here? A good looking girl." Annemary says, "Leave me alone, you prick." and she tries to get away. She can't get away and Lerry says, "What did you call me?" and he grabs her at her neck.

Annemary says loudly, "Leave me alone!" and she pushed Lerry backwards. Lerry almost fell, so he got mad. Annemary tried to run away but the other 2 boys hold her at her arms. Lerry says, "you regret doing that, girl!" Lerry picks up a baseball bat and starts beating up annemary. Annemary slowly falls on the ground and Lerry keeps hitting her on her back with the baseball bat.

Annemary hears a voice saying, "Hey, what are you doing there!?" and then she fell unconsious.

Black Coats Chapter 1

Shinzuzu




The teacher grabs Shinzuzu at his arms and pushes him against the wall. The teacher screams, "I said stop it, stupid child!" Shinzuzu answered calmly with, "Ugly Bald Face, ugly bald face!" The whole class laughed at the teacher. The teaches yells, "STOP IT! STOP IT! YOU STUPID CHILDREN!". The class does not stopp and they say, "Ugly bald face, ugly bald face!"

The teacher take out a table and throws it trough the window. The whole class stops saying a word. Shinzuzu calmly says, "Ha-ha, ugly bald face!" The teacher turns around to Shinzuzu and punches him 3 times in the stomach. Shinzuzu can't breath and the teacher hits him on the head. Shinzuzu falls unconsious.

Black Coats Character Description

Nickname: Shinzuzu
Real Name: Mike
Age: 16
Race: Human
Specialty: Class Clown
Role in the Black Coat: Leader

Main Weapon: Baseball bat
Secondary Weapon: Pocket Knife

Other: Michael Myers mask
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Nickname: Anne
Real Name: Zoƫ
Age: 12
Race: Human
Specialty: Make sharp things of wood.
Role in the Black Coat: Guide ( Will tell the way and scout the area. )

Main Weapon: Wooden stake
Primary Ranged Weapon: Wooden Stakes


Other: Hoodie covering her eyes.


Nickname:
Nomanji
Real Name: Joan Crimson
Age: 11
Race: Half Human half dragon (Can resist more damage)
Specialty: Running
Role in the Black Coat: Support

Main Weapon: Hunting Bow
Melee Weapon: Knife


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Nickname: Yihka
Real Name: Jack Verrol
Age: 14
Race: Human
Specialty: Boxing
Role in the Black Coat: Watcher (Look around, protect others)

Main Weapon: BB handgun
Melee Weapon: Bare Knuckles

Other: BB Bullets. Bandana around head.