woensdag 26 augustus 2009

Black Coats Chapter 15

*The Bell Rings*

School is over, unless you have detention, you will have to stay on school for anotherhour maybe even two. That's why Annemary goes to her locker and then head off to the detention room. But before she went there she got stopped by Shinzuzu. Shinzuzu says: "Hey, yesterday was fun, we should do it more often. Want to go with me to my house?" Annemary answered with: "Sorry, I have detention, lets go there some other time."

Shinzuzu is dissapointed but smiles afterwards: "Ok thats fine! See you later! Bye!" "Bye" is what Annemary said. Annemary head to the detention room. When she arrived there she saw Nomanji. Annemary sits next to Nomanji. She notices they are the only ones with detention. After the teacher left they started talking.

"Hey." is what Annemary said. "I saw what happened outside of the bus." says Annemary. Nomanji answers with: "Huh? Oh, yeah. Isnt he cute?" and she starts to semi-daydream again. Annemary says: "Yeah, but not as cute as Shinzuzu!". Annemary smiles but sees no reaction of Nomanji. Annemary pokes Nomanji.

Nomanji reacts with: "Huh what?" and Annemary says: "I have this strange feeling. It feels negative, it feels very bad." Nomanji: "Why? Are you ok?" Annemary continues: "I think something is going to happen to Yihka. Everytime I see him, I get this strange feeling, a sad negative feeling..." Nomanji starts to get upset by Annemary and says "Nonsense nothing is going to happen! Maybe you ahve that feeling because you know he doesnt like you! You're just jealous!"

Annemary answers with: "No... No I'm not.." Nomanji says: "Yeah you are. Goodbye, hope I never see you again. What a mistake I made when I thought you could be my friend. You're just being nice to steal him from me." Nomanji walks out and slams the door. Before Annemary could say anything she was gone already.

zondag 17 mei 2009

Black Coats chapter 14

Nomanji is sitting in the class room. Suddenly someone opens the door. It's the cute boy! what is he doing here? The teacher is smiling at him and the boy was looking at me. He was walking towards me. "Come!" is what he said out loud and he puleld me away. He holds my hand after I am pulled out of the class room. "We have to hurry, come!" is what the boy said. We ran outside the school till we were at the creek next to the school. Suddenly he starts to run very fast, I tried to run as fast but I fell. He fell too into the grass we were laying.

He pulls me towards his body and he starts to sit. he pulls me kinda wanting me to sit too. I sit too. "Well, you're so beautifull, I am so in love with you. Lets kiss" is what he said. His face comes closer towards mine and he makes a smoochy face. He starts to close his eyes. He comes very close. I start to make a smoochy face too. I clo-

The bell rings

I look around and see that I am still sitting in the class room. Everyone is walking outside. Wait, was this just a dream? I put the books inside my bags again and walk to the next class room. I sit in the middle where I always sit with Biology. I take out my books. "Ow!!" is what I said after I got a paper plane in my eye. "Shhh!" Is what Kimmi said. "Read it !". I open it and read it. "So who is this new cute boy where you are hanging out with?"

I smile towards her after reading it and I take out my pen. I write down "I don't know, but hes cute, pretty, sweet, nice and he has sweeet hair and he's muscu-". "What the hell!?" is what I said when my paper suddenly dissapeared. "No writing secret letters to other student, miss!". I look up ant notice it's te teacher who said that. "Thats one hour detention." I sigh and headbang my head against the table.

Black Coats chapter 13

The bus stopped. The doors of the bus open. They arrived at the bus stop near the school. Everyone steps out and so does Nomanji. She walks toawards school. After some minutes, near the entrance of the school, someone said "Hey." against Nomanji. Nomanji heard it, but ignored it. she was too busy thinking about the boy she met in the Bus. The beautifull boy, so cute and muscular with sweet hair.

Before she knows it she is laying on the ground. She probably tripped over a stone. "Damn i is what she mumbled. She tries to grab her books together that fell out of her bag. Suddenly se sees 2 other hands helping her. "I'll help you." is what the boy said. She recognises the voice! It's from the boy in the bus.

She wants to look up but can't really do that. "..Thanks" is what she mumbled, kinda embarrased that she fell. When they were done with the books, the boy said "Well I guess I'll see you around some other time. Bye!" and the boy walked away. 5 seconds later Nomanji said with a soft voice "..Bye..". She kept looking at the boy till he got inside.

Was she the only one still not inside? She stood up and ran to her class room, she didn't want to come too late.

zondag 10 mei 2009

Black Coats Chapter 12

It's a normal day. The sun shines and it's quite warm.

Nomanji wakes up and goes to school after changing her clothes. While walking to the Bus Stop, she remembers the day her ex boyfriend Tony wanted to kill her. She starts to sob while thinking about it but realizes she shouldnt cry over such thing.

She enters the bus and as usual she has no one to sit next to. She walks to the back of the bus thinking about what to do after school. Maybe go to the cinema? While she wasnt looking where she was walking she bumped into a boy.

"... Sorry." is what Nomanji said. The boy turns around and stares at her. "It's okay." is what the boy said. Nomanji stared back in his eyes. They don't stop staring. Suddenly Nomanji falls over but lands on her feet just on time. The bus started riding. She walked to the seat behind that boy, it was empty. She sat there, thinking about that boy.

vrijdag 20 maart 2009

Black Coats Chapter 11

Shinzuzu and Annemary walk together to their classroom. They decide to sit next to eachother in the classroom. The spot where Nemo usually sits is empty. Also, the spots of his friends are empty too. Yihkah was sitting in another corner with his friends.

...

After a while.

...

"So, 15x2:4x20 is... Um.... 150?" is what Annemary said against Shinzuzu. "Yeah, that is correct." is what Shinzuzu said and Shinzuzu smiles to Annemary afterwards. "Ooh now I understand. Thanks." is what annemary said. Shinzuzu says: "No problem."

Shinzuzu says: "Hey, lets go to my house when school is over. We can watch the movie Twilight together." Annemary nods and says: "Yeah sure I would love to."


*Bell Rings*


Annemary and Shinzuzu walk outside hand in hand. They take their bicycles and Annemary follows Shinzuzu to his house. But, when they went out of sight of the school, Nemo was standing there with his friends. He has a baseball bat in his hands and so do his friends.

Shinzuzu says to Annemary "Lets turn around, I think they would hurt us if we try to cycle there. Lets turn around and take another road." annemary says: "Yeah, ok.". They both turn around with their bicycle and they take the other road instead.

Shinzuzu and Annemary arrive safely at Shinzuzu's house and they pretty much got drunk there and enjoyed their day there. Shinzuzu and Annemary do not wish me to write about this since it contains some mature stuff which they rather keep a secret.





Nomanji. Nomanji was having problems with Tony last time. Since then she has got some social problems. tony hung himself after he tried to kill Nomanji. He did not see the point of life anymore after Nomanji broke up with him and it was the reason of him to take Nomanji's life too.

Nomanji is a strange person to others, but she does not get bullied. Instead, people are scared of her. She is not scared to say what she wants to whoever. Also, she wears dark clothes which is unique on the school she is on. She is the only person who wears so much black there.

But, after the incident, she changed. She doesnt talk almost anymore. Has she been scarred to life by the stab in her heart by Tony? Will she ever be able to get over it? ...

woensdag 11 maart 2009

Black Coats Chapter 10

I got put into a class room. The teacher talked to me about it and what happened. After 5 - 10 minutes he left.

I Stood up and opened the door. I went to Annemary to see how she was. She was in another class room.

She is crying.

...

I open the door slowly and went in. No one else was there. She got a piece of paper against her nose. "Are you ok?" is what I said. Annemary would look at me and say nothing. I decided to sit next to her, on a table, since she was sitting on a table too. I put my arm around her. "It's okay." is what Shinzuzu said.

Annemary accepts it and cries into Shinzuzu's arms. "He is such a jerk.. And.. And what you did for me was so sweet. I just wan.. wa..." is what annemary said before she started crying again.

I pulled her closely to me. I hug her tightly. Annemary stops crying after some time. "Thanks Shinzuzu. I just wanted to te-"

The bell rings.



"That I love you." is what Annemary said.

dinsdag 10 maart 2009

Black Coats Chapter 9

I notice Annemary running towards my direction, but she hit someone with her elbow. It was some tough looking guy. The guy started screaming at her and I noticed she was afraid. I couldn't stop looking at her and I got angry inside. Why is this guy screaming at her?

The guy walks up to annemary, but annemary walks backwards. The guy suddenly runs to her and grabs her at the throat."Why did you do that!?" Annemary was afraid and crying softy: "S..S..Sorry! Let me go jerk!" The guy throws annemary against a table and Annemary flies over it on the ground. Her nose bleeds and she has cuts on her arm.

I couldn't control myself anymore, I pick up a chair and walk up towards me. He does not see me. The big guy walks slowly to annemary but suddenly Yihkah clings around his arms with his arms. "Leave her alone, Nemo." So his name was Nemo. I was looking at it with the chair above my head. Nemo used his elbow and hit Yihkah's face to get loose. Yihkah hit him in the stomach some times but Nemo did not feel anything and kicked Yihkah in the chest. Yihkah fell onto the ground. Nemo punched him on the face till he did not move anymore. Nemo decided to go to annemary again.

My body filled with hate. Why do people like him exist? No, he can't hurt people like that, especially not Annemary. I walked up to him and threw the chair in his back. Nemo fell. I sat on him and punched in against the back of his head around 20 times. Nemo tried to stand up but I punched him again when he tried.

everyone was looking and standing in a circle around it. Nemo suddenly pushed me off him and punched me in the face 2 times, I fell on the ground. Nemo was bleeding. I was looking at annemary who was on the ground too. Her face was full of blood. when he came near, I tackled him while I was on the ground. He landed on his head against a table. I picked up a chair once again and hit him with his 7 or 8 times.

someone grabs me at the arms and pulls be away "YOU *beep* if you ever touch her again I will kill you, *beep*!" It was a teacher who pulled me away. The same happened with Annemary, Nemo and Yihkah.

Black Coats Chapter 8

The bell rings, the class is over.

Annemary puts back the books in her bag and she starts to stand up, to go to her locker. While going to her locker she sees Shinzuzu, but he was too busy talking to this rich girl, Kimmi M. I decided not to talk to him.

I put my books in my locker and take out the books for the next lesson, but first I go to the cafeteria. We do not have anything for 30 minutes anyway. While I walk there I notice that girl that mostly wears black clothes, she looks sad. I decide to go over there and talk to her.

"Hey, you. What's your name?" is what Annemary said. The girl said nothing. Annemary nudges the girl and says it again: "Hey, what's your name?" The girl turns her head around but does not stop walking and says: "My name is Nomanji." She looks infront of her again.

Annemary says: "So what are you doing?" Nomanji doesn't feel like talking and decides to ignore her question. Annemary says: "I was trying to talk to this boy but he was too busy talking to that spoiled girl." Nomanji ignores her again and Annemary decides to go to the cafeteria without Nomanji.



[b]Cafeteria[/b]

It's quite full. I can see punks, neo nazi's, skaters, sporting guys, geeks and the popular people. I sit at the empty table in the corner and open my lunchcase. I take out my bread and eat. A guy came up to me, it was Yihkah. "Hey, are you allright? You are sitting here alone. You can sit with me if you want." said Yihkah. Annemary answered with "No, thanks anyway." because she wants to talk with Shinzuzu. "Okay, you can come whenever you want! Bye." said yihkah. Annemary answered with "bye."

Annemary sees Shinzuzu walking into the cafeteria and she runs to him, hitting someones head with her elbow. The guy she hit up was a tough guy, it's one of those guys just like Lerry. "Hey, you!" he screams and the whole cafeteria becomes quiet.

After looking again she sees it's one of the most feared guys on school.